If i was on a waka and leaving my country it will be tiring just sitting there and rowing,but it will be fun having a look whats out in the ocean,but wonder if they get attacked on the waka.
kia Ora Jamie Well Done on what you wrote about being on a waka . I like it who you were imagining what could happen and what you like about being out on the ocean exploring through the deep blue sea. Have you ever been on a Big waka? ( I definitely haven't but i has been my dream to explore through the beautiful ocean.
Keep It up Jamie and I will be looking at your wonderful blogs
Kia Ora Jamie, I like what you wrote about if you were on a waka, for me it was really interesting. If I was on a waka, it would be bored for me as well if i was just sitting down in the waka and rowing for a long time. In your piece of writing, I saw a mistake with your commer. With your commer you didn't put a space after it, so it looks a bit weird (for me). I would of like to see a bit more writing and a photo or more. From, Georgia!:)!
Aloha Jamie, this is Sheeandra from Tautoro School. I enjoyed reading this piece of work, even though it may not be heaps, but it's still good. I like the way you have tried and not gave up. Maybe next time you could add a bit more about this. If you would like to, you can look at my awesome blog. My blog adress is tssheeandratn.blogspot.co.nz. Blog you later.
kia Ora Jamie
ReplyDeleteWell Done on what you wrote about being on a waka . I like it who you were imagining what could happen and what you like about being out on the ocean exploring through the deep blue sea.
Have you ever been on a Big waka? ( I definitely haven't but i has been my dream to explore through the beautiful ocean.
Keep It up Jamie and I will be looking at your wonderful blogs
Kind Regards Kate !
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jamie,
ReplyDeleteI like what you wrote about if you were on a waka, for me it was really interesting. If I was on a waka, it would be bored for me as well if i was just sitting down in the waka and rowing for a long time. In your piece of writing, I saw a mistake with your commer. With your commer you didn't put a space after it, so it looks a bit weird (for me). I would of like to see a bit more writing and a photo or more.
From,
Georgia!:)!
Aloha Jamie, this is Sheeandra from Tautoro School. I enjoyed reading this piece of work, even though it may not be heaps, but it's still good. I like the way you have tried and not gave up. Maybe next time you could add a bit more about this. If you would like to, you can look at my awesome blog. My blog adress is tssheeandratn.blogspot.co.nz. Blog you later.
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